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Door to door
by David Renton
My first 11 sec club. Irritating policeman asking questions about swan.
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Michael Launder
lip synch on this guy is really good! but you gotta hit some better body movements. the body key poses need lots of time and effort, body language is the most important thing in animation
Removed
Having a good time with the door frame eh
pankaj kushwaha
good work keep it up :)
Lea
Looks like you were working off of a nice reference, but there's too much movement in there. It looks like he's doing a pole dance move in the beginning, which I'm fairly sure isn't what you were going for. The up and down on the arm around f150 also look rather glitchy instead of a subtle scratch.
Evan Helford
I laughed so hard at the guy hugging the pole. This is pretty decent work, but the lip-sync could use work, along with floatiness (frames 155-210).
Megan Huggins
Acting choice isnt very strong