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Wait...Its a swan....
A man is at the Wildlife Rescue Center Currently Describing what he has seen outside his house a few hours ago.
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Niklas Bergwall
I think you switch camera angle a bit too often.
Michael O'Brien
Whoa, why all the camera cuts?! Try keeping it simple, just two shots is all you really need.
Dominic Rayner
Hard on the brain with all the cuts.
Moby
Too many camera moves!
Megan Huggins
Too many camera cuts and an unnecessary character to confuse things
Jay Jörg Smith
Too many cuts. Interesting style, but I would wish then more extreme expressions and poses.
Gavin
you should work for youtube man they would love your work
Jacob Riches
The bodies remind me of the Pivot animation software