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I paid my debt to society!
by Nico Ahun
1 year studying in an Online School, Animation Gym.
I was about 2 weeks
A man is going to talk to his ex-wife, and she stays at the door without letting it pass.
He tries to fix the relationship, but she is still very angry, for everything that happened.
Comments
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Erin Goddard
A really good start, be careful not to enounciate every singe syllable in the dialogue; it creates the impression that the mouths are moving unnaturally fast.
Johann Wong
Poses are there..tighten up the animation, they look really floaty. :)
Luke Coleman
Very Good, love the weighting and camera shots. Only two things I can see wrong with it; the man seems to be slightly cross-eyed and the females unfolding arms are a little to quick. But still, good work!
Vin Liew
animation is stiff, lack of some principles.