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Paid my debt
by Brian Rusnak
Dinner isn't going as planned
Comments
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Zoe Piel
You captured the feel of the dialogue really well here.
Francisco Leon
It's good, but need more eloquence in the expresions and movements, a little bit of energy. Keep it up!
Johann Wong
Needs more movements, the changes are a bit too subtle. (Play around with the cup, etc)
Donald Marks
Some more poses would really push this up a notch. As it is now, they kind of stay seated totem-like in the same pose pretty much throughout. A nice weight shift or two would be great.
Luke Coleman
Some more movement in the eyes / eyesbrows and eyes lids on the female character. Body poses are too rigid for both characters, suggest looking into micro gestures / expressions.
A F
The guy could use a bit more subtle movements, he is completely still for some frames from time to time. Decent work overall, though.