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Divorced
An arrogant and oblivious husband learns that his wife has divorced him way ahead.
Comments
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Zoe Piel
A little too zippy for the dialogue.
Johann Wong
Guy animation could be simplified at the beginning. Watch out for them repetitive movements at the beginning too. ( Guy's left arm).
Overall animation could use more arc, tighter timings & cushioning.
Donald Marks
Decent Start. A bit overacted, and the man's mouth shapes are a bit off putting for me.
Andrew DiLullo
A lot of sudden and jagged movements. The actions are so extreme for such a mellow delivery of dialogue
Brad Bradbury
in my opinion,
the actions and movements are too big for the slow pased dialog.
Monica Stringer
the mix of realism with heavy cartoon elements is really jarring