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Dining Discussion

by Jed B.

Final Rating: 5.98. Finished #20 out of 93 entries.

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Animator

Jed B.

Experience

3 years

Time Taken

2.5 weeks

Description

A husband and wife define their relationship status at a dark restaurant.

Comments

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Francisco Leon

I like it! The animation is fluent. I found that the camera is a bit close at moments, like at the start. I prefer to mantain the head uncut on medium shots. The rest is alright, keep it up!

Johann Wong

Poses are already there. Just need to tighten the animation..looks bit floaty overall.

Luke Coleman