Dinner 4 2

Zoe Piel

Good work but could use some more inbetweening

Scott

Nice solid keys. Would have loved to see some more inbetweens to smooth this out.

Donald Marks

Hah, that male character is hilarious. I would have liked to have seen the line work cleaned up a bit more, Maybe another subtle beat before "I sold it" would have improved the female's acting.

Johann Wong

Hmm..bit too scribbly for me towards the end, but anyways.. The lady in the 2nd shot could use some body movement, subtle atleast. ( eg. Shoulder, arms). Lovely head & lipsync animation though, hoping this would finish a little more stronger. Keep it up! :)

Lea

Around 182 it'd be nice to see an expression change on the guy and maybe having him look down at her hand.

Ignatius Wong

awesome animation!