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Unpleasant surprise
by Sasa Rodrz
Marhsa receives an unpleasant surprise one afternoon
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Johann Wong
Looks really good, if the overall animation was a lil more tighter. Felt like some parts are jerky & stiff. Watch out for slight elbows , shoulder pops as well.
Erin Goddard
I like the direction that this is going. watch out for the fingers colliding with the table, in a few spots it looks like the hands go right through the paper and the table. very nice facial animation.
Donald Marks
Really great stuff. The lip sync and facial animation is kinda missing here. Polish that and you've got a strong piece.
Theodor Isaac Zecevic
Her last line didn't look so convincing. To me, it is the mouth that has her looking like she has a faint smile.
Poppy Marlow
You've animated her face brilliantly! :D