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Alice in Videogame Land
by MFuller
Thief
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Yonghwan Seok
IK Practice?
Ryan Woods
can certainly see the character "thinking" and felt grounded/ balanced. would recommend bringing feet closer together to feel more natural, and at times feet feel like they are magnetized to the ground. especially on the ending pose character seems to put effort into lifting foot. once you get the hands finished I think this will improve a lot!
Adrian Petitjean
Floaty animation. Take some references. DId not understand anything.
Joshua Kaberline
Not really sure what the story was here…
Z S
Why's the gun floating in the air?
Victor Lemée
I didn't get the story, lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Daniele Croce
It needs a lot of improvement in animation and a clear setting (expecially in musical shot like this).