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Space Cowboy
by Gabe Grende
Description
Is it Sci-Fi, is it Western, I honestly have no idea.
Comments
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Animatical
Needs a lot of improvement, but not bad for a beginner!
Yonghwan Seok
That Gun needs to have constraint.
Adrian Petitjean
Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals
Victor Lemée
lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs
Tisa Rahman
Like the Western feel. I feel like the shot with both characters could’ve been framed better with the rule of thirds since it looked like that’s what one character was doing (while the main character was centred)





