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Space Cowboy

by Gabe Grende

Final Rating: 3.13. Finished #51 out of 52 entries.

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Animator

Gabe Grende

Experience

New to 3D animation

Time Taken

A week and a half

Description

Is it Sci-Fi, is it Western, I honestly have no idea.

Comments

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Animatical

Needs a lot of improvement, but not bad for a beginner!

Yonghwan Seok

That Gun needs to have constraint.

Adrian Petitjean

Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals

Victor Lemée

lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs

Tisa Rahman

Like the Western feel. I feel like the shot with both characters could’ve been framed better with the rule of thirds since it looked like that’s what one character was doing (while the main character was centred)