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Research
by Ryan Woods
music for an audio clip is pretty fun,
Rig from gumroad. By
Christoph (The Stoff) Schoch
great rig, highly recommend
Comments
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Yonghwan Seok
Interesting idea. But seems like the animation is not completed.
Adrian Petitjean
Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals. I can see some good silhouettes here and there. With a bit more work on the animation, it could look nice.
Victor Lemée
lack some weight. Take some reference and watch your arcs good silhouette some time :°)
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
Nice idea!
Jonny
This felt like a blocking for what could be a nice animation. I must say though, to me it didn't suit the music. I think you should continue with this outside of the competition, play with the timing, especially around the fall, and then work into it.
Jamie F
Nice. Your first two poses, all the body parts start moving at the same time and at the same speed, and they all stop moving at the same time too. So it gives a floaty and mechanical feel. Remember your arcs for more natural movement, don't let the computer do the inbetweening for you. When she gets up to walk away, thats very nice.