Let me sing please.

Aaron James Mongcopa

funny! lack of slow in and slow out though.

Adrian Petitjean

Weight problems . Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals

Victor Lemée

lack some weight, Take some reference and watch your arcs,
add more anticipation here and there, good ideas for the end, make me laugh

Alvindra Surya Wardana

great!!! the man who play the guitar is great..
just make extras more alive to make it awesome, now it's still like a robot..