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Pursued by the patrol
Hi all,
it's the first time at 11secondClub
I hope you like my animation
Any feedback are very welcome! :)
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Ben Hall
This is good you're headed in the right direction. A more lively background would be a great improvement even a simple one like hallways she could be running through instead of default 3D cubes. The animation is smooth and well done but is a bit too fast in some places. What's happening doesn't really match the music in theme or in rhythm maybe if there was more tension in the scene it would help closer camera shots more like the final shot we see in the end of the video.
Yonghwan Seok
Good work. but Why the ending is cut
Aaron James Mongcopa
nice concept!
Adrian Petitjean
Try posing the characters so that they have a nice silhouette. Wotk on the timing and the weight.
Ryan Woods
awesome work, want to see more. 2 points i would refine are the bounce off the wall. have parts of her come off the wall before the other parts follow almost like she is being peeled off the wall.
the other part is her legs scooting her butt on the ground, they move so fast! also her upper body would not be able to sway left to right to match them at this pace... also try pointing the knees outward a bit instead of up? idk, if it would read better.
Victor Lemée
Nice story, like some expression here and there but lack a bit of weight ( the push against the wall part especially)
mickey
5th
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto
I was going to give a MUCH higher grade for the animation, but then you cut the audio provided.