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The Whole Room
by David Mussel
I have been working as an animator and story artist for the last 10 years.
4 entire days
A girl is astonished by her new room.
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matias lagunas
THE MIRROR!!!!!!!!!!! :O
david
this is so good. love how you put the mirror in the shot.
bárbara espinosa
Stunning!!! Amazing use of the surroundings and camera angle to make it feel compelling.
talha bin khalid
like the ending!
Andriy Hrymalyuk
Oh my God!!! :O
The trick with the mirror made my heart skip a beat.
Superb animation! Fantastic emotions!
My favourite :) very inspirational!
Thank you!!
CW
Love the walk to the camera and the reflection in the mirror - excellent work!
Omar
Great
Jerry Lau
Brilliant on using the mirror!!! Great work!!!
Cody Cessna
The mirror was a cool choice! Her reflection is too big though. It harms the sense of space. When she hugs the lady, she’s about half the size of her reflection. The mirror is on the same plane as the lady, so the girl should be about 1/4 to 1/3rd of the size that she is in her reflection. You would probably have to lower the mirror for the reflection to even show up. Or you could change the angle of your wall by adding a corner and adjusting the perspective cues on the dresser.
Jennie
like the clothing and hair choices.
Nils Kuhl
Nice use of the Mordor:))
Jonathan Fontaine
One of the best this month !
The girl moving towards us in convincing perspective, the use of the mirror to keep her face visible as she turn away and the emotional run at the end, followed by a great reaction of the lady .. wow.. overall the emotions feels true, great job !!
Laura Truxillo
Absolutely love the acting here. Nice touch with the mirror so we could still see the little girl's expressions as she turned.
Shubham garg
Nice idea with good acting.