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Angry robot

by Mordrenn

Final Rating: 4.28. Finished #42 out of 61 entries.

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Animator

Mordrenn

Experience

student

Time Taken

1 week

Description

Mikey and Mobot stuck in a grocery store

Comments

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Tristan Riggs

excellent poses

Natalie

Good start. Love the change of eyes in the robot. Mikey seem robotic at the first line and the last, but there was a little smooth animation after the robot turned around. Could be worked on for smooth animation throughout the shot

Shaun Bartoo

You've got some good poses! It feels a bit incomplete, but if you were to spline this out and finish, it could be a really nice piece.

Richard Adams

Would've scored higher if you'd gotten past the blocking stage and polished this. Love the scenario you came up with.

Predrag Lazic

Definitely a Raph situation but Mikey pulls it off.

Wash

Fantastic key poses!

David Fliesen

Suggest reviewing the 12 principals of animation to make your future works better: https://ohmy.disney.com/movies/2016/07/20/twelve-principles-animation-disney/ and stay away from copyright characters.