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Just Girl Things
by Athena
Lavender and Naga find out that the local flower shop is absolutely a front
Medium- Blender's Grease Pencil
Still somewhat new to the program, likely going to try make a custom brush next time as the default chunkiness is a little inelegant here
Comments
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Isaiah Hoeninghaus
If you cut out about half of the lizard character's key poses It would be improved by a lot. Choose a few and focus on those, and the timing would be stronger. I really like the air quotes pose, if you raised their right arm from their size it would open up the silhouette and make the pose even stronger.
Shaun Bartoo
Really nice style, good acting. I dig this one
Wash
The energy and expressions match the dialogue perfectly.
David Fliesen
Pretty nice! I get a sense of the characters and feel like it's actually them saying the lines.





