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Undercover
by fang ze ran
Description
Two guys went to rob the place, and..
Comments
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Shaun Bartoo
Very snappy timing, nice arcs. I don't totally buy some of the acting choices (for example the lunge forward with the sword doesn't feel clearly motivated), but in general you've got a nice level of polish. I think the lip sync and facial acting in general is a weak point in the shot, and an area you could focus on improving. Watch your eyelines and the pops in the mouth.
David Fliesen
Try limiting your camera movements a bit more. It's a bit too jarring in my opinion and camera movements are too abrupt for us to fully take in the animation.





