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Two Rats
Started 12 months ago; mainly self taught
Two weeks, on and off
Two anxious rats try to figure out how to proceed.
Comments
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Visual Animation
Perfect
Heidi
I love the fluid movement of the arms
Tristan Riggs
this is very cool, great style, lovely characters, very charming
Ruben D. Cabrera
is very flowy, which I don't know if I like it or not... Like movement isn't supposed to look like that, but is kind of captivating.
Shaun Bartoo
This style is fantastic. The only thing really holding this back is the sluggish timing. You could go wayyy snappier in your inbetweens.
Richard Adams
Love how smooth this is. But there's a strange floatiness too, which I've actually never seen in a 2d entry before. Drawings are really polished and there's a...look of delicacy to this that I really like.
Predrag Lazic
Some secondary animation might be a plus, moving tails or something.
David Fliesen
Movements seem a bit forced and unnatural. Also suggest reviewing the 12 principles of animation https://ohmy.disney.com/movies/2016/07/20/twelve-principles-animation-disney/