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Murder on market
by Zoé Ortega
An awkward situation in a supermarket, with two characters not really on the ball.
Comments
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Shaun Bartoo
This is interesting but I don't know if your cut in the middle to a fantasy sequence is totally working. Great style though! I'd focus on tightening up your lip sync in future months
Richard Adams
Animation isn't great, but I love that unique rendering style you used. The scenario you chose works well, too.
Predrag Lazic
A for originality.
Wash
Love the flash-forward as a stylistic choice. It's crazy but it matches the emotional level of the dialogue and doesn't distract from the intention.
David Fliesen
Way too many shots for this short of an animation. You should limit your cameras so we can focus on the animation.