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We have got the treasure chest
by Subir Santra
Description
Conversation between two robbers.
Comments
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David Fliesen
Nice storyline development and staging. Try to make your conversation feel more like they are talking to each other. It feels a bit too staged, if you know what I mean. Like the safe opening at the end. Nice touch.