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Where do we go From Here?
Zero Professional, Student about to graduate
3 weeks
Two women discussing how to get out in-between a rock and a hard place.
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Shaun Bartoo
Hey really nice work. This has a ton of personality and the animation is really clean. I don't personally love the design on the head and face of the "explain what..." character. The doesn't feel very solid (in the 12 principles sense of having volume). The face itself feels a bit small and off-center from the face often. This might just be a style thing, but it doesn't totally work for me. Also, I noticed that her hips are feeling fairly locked in place across weight shifts from f40-200. You could try having the hips/body translate more in space as she shifts her weight for a more realistic style of body mechanics if that's something you want to shoot for.
Predrag Lazic
Maybe some squash n' stretch or blur movement frames.