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U Killed Him
by Satish Kumar
This is my first time Participating in the competition.
Comments
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Daniel Vasconcellos
nice render, cool animation, need a bit of work in the lipsync!
Paul Wei
The guy's animation at the end is nice. The girl's animation seems rougher, especially her eye blinks and her settle after she turns.
Vinu Nair
quite good! but the expressions of girl would have been much more better :)
Gabriel
she is sniffing like a squirrel the first 100 frames,
but he acts great. facials look good
Amartya Mukherji
very well done.
Jack Granger
I like the eye movement in the girl but I think tone down the blinks
Ryan D Lowe
Lip sync needs better shapes to read more clearly.
Hannah Wilson
Overall it's looking really good, but one spot that could be improved is that first split second. The woman is accusing him of killing someone, but the face she makes when she's supposed to be thinking about it looks more like, "oh, I forgot to do my laundry", rather than "this guy killed someone and I'm just realizing it." She should look a little more torn apart. Other than that, good work!