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What did she see exactly?
by Paul Wei
He tries to calm down his girlfriend who may or may not have witnessed a crime.
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Danny Kneip
Love the movement in the beginning from both the characters and the camera - great to see it turn from a "normal" shot to a dutch angle! The lip sync is good, and the expressions are nice. The hand animation is the weakest part of this animation, in my opinion. Her hand at F37 is very awkward and is basically frozen in time from F53 to about F72. Him pulling her closer is strong (her expression is great), but she remains lifeless after that and it's a pity. Still, I like what you did overall.
Amartya Mukherji
nice try could have been better
Aaron Junyou
It's nice, but after he says "Life" his mouth closes immediately. I felt that was weird. But great job
Babul Prasad
body actions are fine, need to work on lipsync
Ryan D Lowe
You need some simple cushion on those fingers when they interact with her face. I think it will sell the firm/softness contrast.