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My Son's Life
by Hakan Abbas
Description
Lost her son to a father's desperation.
Comments
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Ryan D Lowe
This is decent to be sure. It doesn't need that hugeintro though. That runs 100F by itself! We would need 2 seconds tops. OR you could place that picture next to the character with the gun and have him gesture toward it to sell the idea it's his family and he's grieving.