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A bored father trying to make his son out of the virtual world.
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Sabina K
Genius idea!
Daniel Vasconcellos
Great idea!
Moy Parra
been there!
Robert Firestone
Love the concept!
Mike W
Funny idea but I agree with his mom
Srinivasan S
great one :)
Jocelyn Gray
Haha, *really* great and original story for this audio! Made me laugh :)
Dan Harriman
Wow good job! The idea is crystal clear as are your poses. This piece entertains! Overall though, your animation technique needs improvement in portrayal of weight, showing overlap, and most of the other principles. But you got the really hard part sorted, which is portraying an idea!
[user]
Funny idea !
Aaron Junyou
In a world of social media, the boy needed it
Ryan D Lowe
This concept is awesome. Good stuff! Break up the poses a bit more though. Feels too even.
Natalie Wilkinson
Hahaha loved your concept. Took me back home to Miami.
Sarah Johnson
Awesome concept! It feels like this for us computer folk sometimes.
Rayray TigerCub
This is hilarious haha
Connor Kabbage
The animation could use some polishing but I think the concept is one of the funniest ones this competition
RobertCollier
haha, i love the idea nicely executed as well
Sergio Barragan L
that's funny!!!
Danny Kneip
I don't think the reactions play very well here. I would have him angry that he didn't kill his son, instead of sad. "No I did not" is well synced, but the other lines need polishing. The woman's line and acting choice doesn't quite work because she can see what we can't see (at that point) that the man clearly did not "kill him".