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Evil Magicians
Animated with Malcolm and Walter rigs. Animated in Maya
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Bruno de Coninck
The character on the right is really well animated. The only problem with him is that he stops moving before the end of the animation. It could be improved with some moving hold and/or reactions. The second one, the white shirt man. It is not bad, but some moves are a little weird...
Nathan Greensmith
Great performance and animation, good work.
Ben Halstead
Great work! Just needs a little smoothing out in my opinion. For example, at the point "come save you", the man in the hat has about two or three little jerks in his movement as he settles back into his chair, where I think more of a simple ease-in, ease-out would read better. Also, I wish the rabbit moved at least a little.
Ukia N
This is really well done! I love the characterization you gave each character, especially the old man.
Jessica "Jess" Jerome
very nicely done. I do wish the rabbit moved though
Kyle Novak
funny, and I want to know more.
Paula Decanini
Timing with character on right seems off. Tweak your keys so it hits better on the right beats. The way the old man characters walks into the frame is pretty good. However his right wrist looks broken resting on the chair at the end. Good job!
Penny S
It was really great, the walk was a bit strange but kind of worked
Kyra Toomey
The guy shifts forward and back twice. Maybe make one more subtle then another to make it less repetitive? Love the flourish you have going with the hands and fingers, and the second characters acting is great!
Samidha Kumar
nice idea... but work on the lipsync and hitting poses. A video reference always helps :)