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Shake Down
by Joseph
1 year worth as a student with on and off again classes
4 weeks
Rigs from Romain's portfolio. This is the midterm for my current animation class.
Comments
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Nikolas Diamant
Too jerky
Eric Raffle
your characters where too much like robots, very linear motion and too stiff.
Nathan Greensmith
Good poses with some nice camera work, animation needs to be a bit more fluid though, but good effort.
Bruno de Coninck
I think you should try to work in pose to pose. It will really help you to get a smooth motion. In the same idea, try to make your poses the more readable as a silouette. When your character on the left move the bat up and down, you should add some weight shift on the the character's pose. If you are serious in getting into animation, I stongly suggest your to read the Richard William's book : Animator's Srvival Kit. Good luck!
Kyra Toomey
The walk in and sit down wasn't terrible, but needs some weight shifting along with over shoots and settles. The second characters bat jitters around.
Samidha Kumar
keep Practicing :)