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Call Him

by Paul Boogaards

Final Rating: 2.52. Finished #144 out of 151 entries.

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Animator

Paul Boogaards

Experience

5 years of animation school, 4 years of art classes and 2 years of acting school.

Time Taken

3 weeks

Description

Two hikers come across a person stuck in the tree, which they refuse to help.

Comments

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Bruno de Coninck

I don't know if you worked with key poses but if you didn't, I think it could improve your work. Also, if you didn't read it, I strongly suggest you to read Richard Williams' book : Animator's Survival Kit.

Eric Raffle

terrible choice of acting you should record yourself to get better motion, your acting was so slow and too many static parts

Nathan Greensmith

Movements aren't very fluid quite jerky, but it reads well with an obvious narrative, good job.

Samidha Kumar

keep practicing :)