A small accident

Bruno de Coninck

I think that there is a little gimball problem at the end wit the arm of the character on the right but I might be wrong. Over all, there is some floating parts between poses. I have the same problem in my work : the moving hold doesn't seems natural enought. My problem is probably caused by my references. Check it on your side!

Richard Clark

I see you're going for a cartoony feel for the performance but you should still shoot reference for your piece. In order to exaggerate correctly it needs to come from a natural performance.

Eric Raffle

acting doesn't suit the audio and your actions are too snappy.

Nathan Greensmith

Great personality in the second character, I only usually judge it on the animation during the audio time, but I feel I should say fantastic phone spin and walk off at the end.

Moby

Good start

Kyra Toomey

Add an overshoot to him snapping up to a standing position. You're fluid animation falters at that moment.