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Robert Zhou

There needs to be more movement! The characters are too stiff. Keep working at it!

Nikolas Diamant

They look too stiff, the first guy's shoulders should be down a bit, and they should both move their torso's more

Richard Clark

Too floaty all around. I would also recommend shooting reference next time.

Nathan Greensmith

There doesn't seem to be much to this animation and the lip sync needs work, The scene and background is nice though. good effort, keep practicing.

Ben Halstead

Framing is pretty good but the lip syncs need a lot of work, and some amount of gesturing, however subtle, would help immensely.

Bruno de Coninck

I think you could try to move your character a little bit more. Even with a very minimalist shot, someone who talk, wil have some micro moves, expressions, etc. For now, there are some moves, but they don't seems to fit the feelings of your characters. I strongly suggest you to try to use references, particulary on very subtile moves.

Kyra Toomey

Lip sync is to be desired, needs clearer mouth shapes