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Have a Seat
by TJ Askew
Description
Coming back from a bar, and having a beer.
Comments
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Amy Hook
I love the body language in this!
Nicki Pierce
This may be more of an artistic choice but the angle and style of her hair really covers her face in a distracting way. The movements of them walking to the couch need a lot of work. Either spend some time smoothing that out or start with them on the couch.
Jean Lamy
Work on the walk. The rest of the movement doesn't seem fluent.





