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The New King
Liam and his twin brother Marcus were chosen to be King of two different world.. But a war is beginning between the kingdoms..
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Sergio Candela Ramirez
great great!! I love it!
Skylar Zerr
probably a top 10 finish! goodjob. the camera change at the very end was a little bit jarring for that sensitive moment. I think you just needed to keep the original shot, and slowly push the camera in a very small amount towards the kids face. Good job!
Nicki Pierce
The kid character had great shifting emotions and reactions even when he wasn't the focus. Very engaging and loved the end frame.
Erin Goddard
I like the framing and the emotion in this one. One thing that I will say is that the lip sync feels a bit off. for example when the blue character says "things" it almost looks like he is saying "Mleh" The teeth need to make the "ss" sound at the end. but overall I think it's a pretty good piece! :)
Forest Eyster
First I love the idea, and camera movement on this scene. However, your biggest concern is the lip-sync. You have the mouth moving, but it doesn't feel like your hitting the words with the audio. Another thing, is that some parts of the main characters body stays still. He needs to breath, and that effects the whole body in the most subtle way.
Jordan Barg
Blue guy is too straight on composition wise, put him more at a 3/4. I love how you took advantage of the boy's delivery of the lines being pretty bland by keeping his body pretty stiff, most people had him moving around everywhere and it's just too much. Overall great job!
jagdeep singh
nice