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Worried about Marcus

by Carmel Horowitz

Final Rating: 6.29. Finished #11 out of 107 entries.

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Animator

Carmel Horowitz

Experience

Seven months in the industry

Time Taken

7 days

Description

Two friends are travelling to see their friend after he's been injured in an accident.

Comments

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Skylar Zerr

really great animation here. what brings your score down is that hand pose that you hit twice. Never his the same pose twice.
otherwise its really strong.

Bradley Adams

I feel that some of the lip sync part could be better, but overall the animation was nice and subtle.

Brett

I really like all the subtle movements you have, it gives it a more realistic look. When he says "I guess not" his right hand pops up very suddenly, you should probably add some inbetweens.

Michael Kristiansen

Not a fan of the second guys hand gestures (to emphasize what he says). Seems unnatural. But other than that it looks good.

jagdeep singh

startnig animation not good