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Feelings

by Yuri Marcel Vieira

Final Rating: 4.89. Finished #52 out of 107 entries.

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Experience

not nearly enough

Time Taken

almost two weeks

Description

It sucks to have feelings sometimes.

Comments

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Skylar Zerr

some good ideas here. not sure why the character is looking to camera right all the time. Is her dad there?
Cheers

Amy Hook

I love the asymmetry in the mouth! Nice. I think you need to make the spine curvier as she goes for the lean forward.

Jean Lamy

Too stiff, she falls down too quickly and there is no slight bounce afterwards. Usually there would be. It also doesn't make much sense if she puts the phone down and answers to voice 2's statement. Nice poses though, I had the same idea.

Jordan Lewers

Really digging the mouth movements at the end.