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Feel Things
Between work and sport, I animate this scene with a girl and his psychologist.
Enjoy!
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Sergio Candela Ramirez
good job
Skylar Zerr
whats up there, a bird? heh.
Jean Lamy
More shaking of the head when he says "It's not". Body language gives a strong emotion than facial expression. The second camera angle is confusing. I don't know to whom that right foot belongs to. The part where she says, "I really care about Marcus", she should be shaking her head. It contradicts her statement. Nice job though
Erin Goddard
Not a bad animation. The first pose and framing looks a bit lewd and uncomfortable, not sure if that was done on purpose but it is maybe something to watch for.
Andrea
She is a lady, the audio doesn't match the character!
John
From what I could see, the characters movements looked quite good. I think the eyebrows on the man could be a little more expressive. On the other hand, the resolution could have been increased by quite a bit, and the camera angle on the woman wasn't so flattering.
Jordan Lewers
...Panty shot? I'm truly unsure what the purpose could be. It's especially awkward since the guy is looking straight at down there
Jordan Barg
Damn watch out for that opening shot having her spread her legs and face the camera like that.
jagdeep singh
nice