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rescuing marcus

by Vachan Katrathana

Final Rating: 3.76. Finished #85 out of 107 entries.

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Experience

New to animation

Time Taken

40 hrs

Description

couldn't render it so posting the playblast...

Comments

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Jean Lamy

If the kid is in a kidnapped situation, he would be moving more. If you wanted him still, you should've perhaps put him in a sleeping position. Also, the first character's pose isn't aligned to her eye. Minor details really add up. Also minimize the camera movement. Nice work though. I like the second character's poses.

Kerem

Everything freezes except the controls of the poses you want to achive body moves as a whole

Jakub Kupčík

The set-up seems a bit too convoluted, try to think of something simpler next time and focus on the animation more.