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Consolation

by Bill Muensterman

Final Rating: 3.77. Finished #83 out of 107 entries.

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Animator

Bill Muensterman

Experience

Four years as a hobby

Time Taken

Twenty days

Description

A tough conversation brings two characters together.

Comments

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Skylar Zerr

I liked this one. It looks intentionally like you are animating it strangely. gj

Jean Lamy

Too many movements, the character feels a little too fluid. Needs to feel more natural. Second character looks stiff in the beginning, try a different pose and hold more poses overall. You're on a good path.

Nicki Pierce

Despite the animation being very simplistic, you do get a sense of emotion from both characters so well done there. However at frame 167, the boy moves too much in response to the hand on his shoulder. It might have been nice to add in a little hair movement around frame 27 because the boy moves his head so much.