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Marcus!
My first participation:) Only used one model for both characters.
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Jemal Meadows
Great Work!
I really liked the animations with the first character, especially with the "I really care about Marcus" part. I see you added a bit of camera animation with it too.
I think some of the poses can be tweaked with the second character though. Mainly when he opens his arms. I feel like that could happen when he says "feel."
Reyane Ashtar
Looks good. Make sure to let the shoulders flow more loosely to give a lively feel.
Jodie
One thing that would help this shot a lot, especially with the 2 characters using the same rig is if you kept each on different sides of the screen during shot changes. So I would make the one with the female voice to the right in the first shot, keep the second shot as is and flip the final shot.
Jakub Kupčík
The camera angles need improvement. Look up the 180 degree rule. It almost looked like the same character talking to himself. And even if that was the intention, the 180 degree rule could've been implemented (a good example is the scene in Lord of the Rings where Gollum talks to himself)
Jean Lamy
Confusing characters and a little blocky on some movements