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by DongHun Kim

Final Rating: 5.49. Finished #23 out of 84 entries.

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Animator

DongHun Kim

Experience

3years

Time Taken

few days

Description

just a one guy
:D

Comments

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Coltin

Looks good! Would like to see some differences in the hand gestures (right now it feels like there’s a lot of twinning happening. It be nice to see some more body movement cause he’s feeling very stiff or pinned. Maybe too many blinks found a tiny bit distracting. All in all good job! :)

Elisabeth Janerka

Nice subtle animation but his hands being so huge takes a lot of the attention

Hardik

-- Eyebrows raised too much from the start, I'd down them.
-- It's a bit long dialogue so viewer would want to see the other guy talking too.
-- @F-104: Noticed Right thumb is going through index finger. I liked that thumb rubbing btw.
-- I'd like this guy resting or a bit bent over table, left hand resting on table, If he's talking to bartender then it's okay but he's talking to other guy on the same round table, he's in seated position so hands on table make more sense than this standing pose.
-- One Tip: Do not repeat same animation, like eyebrow raising, hand gesture.. You can do it but add some variation.

Tushar Khandaria

amazing animation I must saY

Amanpreet Singh

LIGHTING IS VERY GOOD, SET-UP COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER, THE LIP SYNC WITH AUDIO NEEDS A LOT OF IMPROVEMENT.

Nelson Lima Villamil

a bit slow at the end but really nice work!

Stijn van der Plas

I think you made an interesting choice for the character’s emotions but the posing might be better if the shapes of the arms were less symmetrical like on frame 40-60 and 124-144 and if the second (left) hand is used for the rest of the poses.

Isabelle Dussault

I like the movements, there's a big problem in the dialogue though, your character says the wrong lines bu the end.

Andi Pearson

if you were going to do only one character, I wish the acting would have been more extreme to make it interesting. The poses are very good, lip sync fits the audio amazingly

Jackie Nguyen

Nice acting!

Ximena Roldan

the start its a bit too still, maybe make a bit more of the initial 27 frames