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Take it easy..
by Noyan
Talking with his ex-criminal friend.
Comments
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Jamie F
Could use some work on your ease ins and ease outs but some nice posing going on
Catherine Mullenger
Nice framing.
The characters seem to move a little too 'all at once' pose to pose, it'd be worth delaying certain parts of the body and overlapping to make everything flow a little better.
With the hand slap at the end the visual hit usually works better if it preceeds the sound.
Amanpreet Singh
LACKS GESTURE, SEEMED A LITTLE BORING
Kimberly
I believe that this is on the right track once more time is put in for the inbetweens and breakdowns. The first 50ish frames is the direction I would go towards.
Jackie Nguyen
Interesting fynamic!