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Memories of time
Remember the past through the years. Candles and sparks.
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McKinley C
good but upsetting
Kevin C. Burke
Pretty grim idea :( Good animation on the breathing at the beginning and the closeup of the hands of the clock. The animation of the guard flipping the switch feels wrong. His wrist is broken when it should be locked. Also, for the birthday shot at the end, I think it would be better if he showed a stronger change of emotion to happiness.
Space Chicken
POOOOOOOOOOO POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUW!
Leah M
yup thats horrifying but awesome
The camera angles and his panic with the cut to the clock was really interesting. The characters movements are well done especially the officer. The Story was dark but had an oddly bright ending? Whats happening seems far different from the audio but does still capture a scene with emotion.
I think A bit of context added would help with the intentions but this was well animated!
J.K. Riki
Nice little story, well done on the concept.