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Forgotten Plans
A man recalls his hope for the future from his youth and realizes that he never completed his goals.
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McKinley C
nice use of facial expressions
Kevin C. Burke
It's a good setup. There are many actions that pop and distract from the acting. Please check out how to animate spacing and also try to track your arcs to give fluid motion.
Leah M
Oh intresting!
The scene of him looking sadder rather than happier and reminiscent is an interesting perspective to take! His harsh movements make him appear frustrated with is responded with a bit of suprise from the second character which makes sense. Even the slouch at the end gtells alot about how he's felling The scene of the animation itself is also well done.