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A Walk Down Melodrama Street
by G Cziraki
5-10 years on and off
4-5 days altogether, had to do it after work
Man hath not seen a thing so fragile as the male ego.
/An actor walks down the stage, overplaying his self-pitying monologue./ Made with the Sam v1.2 rig by Gabriel Salas
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Leah M
Ok yeah that got me
The word in the background was just the right size when i realized I laughed comedy right there. I love all his poses especially the arms back pose that goes into a more casual walk. I love the care free personality he gives off. the shake of his head near the end and him slowing down for a moment in the middle were perfect.
All i have is a nitpick or a question. Why doe he hold his stomach when he slows down. I can see on his face he was sad for a moment but it doesn't really matter
J.K. Riki
He feels more like a puppet than a living, breathing character. The movements are a little too jerky and forced, let him act naturally and you'll really have something. I enjoy the background and camera move, it was a nice touch. Good luck next month!