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If there's another chance
by Deva Satvika
My first entry on 11 SC for practice and planning a demo reel
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McKinley C
i'd love to see more movement in the body!
Kevin C. Burke
Pretty good lip-sync. I think this needs a few more poses and a different camera angle to be entertaining (perhaps a slow dolly-in?)
Leah M
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I like the slow zoom into the character and the slight movement in the torso making it like he's tsking a deep breath. The slight close of his hand is a nice detail too. You did a good job lip syncing as well!
I think if I were to say anything it's be adding to the facial giving it more expression. Maybe if you cross the characters arm and keep the animated hand part you can zoom in closer to the face and have that be more of the focus. great work!
Richard Adams
Needs more emotional expressiveness, especially in the face. Also very floaty. Search the forum and youtube about fixing floatiness in animation.
olivia hartanto
mouth movement is already good. but do not forget about the other body part movement to support it