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playing games

by david

Final Rating: 2.72. Finished #95 out of 100 entries.

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Animator

david

Experience

1 year

Time Taken

3 days

Description

he is playing games in the darkness

Character Rig by Animschool.com, Josh Sobel, Josh Burton, David Andrade.

Comments

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Caitlin Cooke

Very stiff. Lightning is cool though

Mohamed Muhamed

is he playing

Danny Kneip

From where you started with this concept to where you ended up, I would still say it's over-animated, and many of the suggestions made in the WIP forum largely ignored. But that's okay if you're happy with your submission!! :) There are some good moments here, but they are overshadowed by what's wrong. The Wii idea is brilliant!! ;) And I'm happy you took advantage of the opportunities it presented, but your animation is all over the place, lacking control, patience and clarity.

Sergane Sariani

the worst TV idea I've seen this month, a lot of movement doesn't mean a good animation, the trick is to be subtle about it :)