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by Damian Keefe

Final Rating: 2.61. Finished #96 out of 100 entries.

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Animator

Damian Keefe

Experience

limited

Time Taken

20 hours

Description

Stewart can't carry anymore items...

Comments

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Aaron Rivera

I can't really tell what's going on. The movments are very stiff and nothing seems to have weight or momentum. What keeps hitting him back?

Caitlin Cooke

stiff movement is holding this back

Benjamin Berg

This needs lots of work. You should buy some books on amazon about the fundamentals of animation.

Danny Kneip

Picking up the box at frame 6 needed more attention, and problems all along the way. Feel free to post progress reports in the WIP forum to strengthen your work!

Sergane Sariani

ok, you set the keys, than you need to refine in between, what you did is like the first step in animation, so next time, refine everything