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Tarzan in a casting show
Tarzan has never experienced failure. But this one judge desperately wants to see him fail.
rendered in viewport 2.0
Comments
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Shakya Achyut
like the idea and acting...would love to see some exaggerated lips sync
Jordan Barg
I like the animation but I don't get why there's letters popping out and what he's holding? Also there's a few lip sync problems, specifically around when he says "voice".
Harry Roger Smith
The indian accent entering the frame is a bit too snappy for me, but apart from that I really like this! Well done
Julien Ferritto
good idea !!
Alex Ang
That's my man
Szilard Hadobas
Nice job! I like the idea, however the realisation needs more work. Mainly body mechanics. You need to break up the character parts because now everything happens at the same time. The biggest issue I believe are the camera and the cuts. I don't feel the 1-2 shots are connected well. He looks on the jury before the abrupt zoom, and after the cut we see him looking away. Then you cut right on a blink what you shouldn't do. I feel a pop in the left jury member's wrist at about 100F... I hope it helps