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Audition
Description
You got great acting, yay congratz! Except.... we need you to add more spice to it, let's say... an accent?
Bonnie Rig by Josh Sobels Rig
Ray rig courtesy of CGTarian Online School
Comments
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Jyrki Kanto
The weird camera movement in the beginning takes my attention away from the character.
Both the characters' eyes are flying around, other than that this looks good.
Alex Ang
Have the guy look at a spot where the jury member is supposed to be and have hi return his gaze to that spot after looking away
Aravind Kumar
Animation is too floating..