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Silly Detention
Involved in an after-school fight, these two students got punished by their 'creative' foreign language teacher.
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Marcus Taylor
Your lip sync is pretty good, and I love the doughnut idea, it really works well with the audio track. It looks a little bit pose to pose at the moment but with more time could look great.
Lee Nam
Yummy~
Jyrki Kanto
For clarity, you should avoid crossing the line of action with the camera. http://i.stack.imgur.com/Huylb.jpg
Brian Heath
the nibble @ 78 is a nice touch...
Alex Ang
Who is below who in your scene and have them looking up at the others, right now merry is vlogging to the audience and the two malcoms are just answering for us for some reason.
Bobby Russell
You can't beat the dragon
Sabrina Winkel
Random 3rd character popped out of nowhere