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Donut Thief
Student, this is my first character animation w dialogue
Didn't count, maybe 15 hours?
Lets just say things get personal when Krispy Kreme is involved...
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Jen Quinn
I really like the facial animation, the little eyebrow lift is great - very natural and subtle. The animation flows well and the timing is good. My only criticism is that I’m not sure all the hand movements are particularly natural. The swing in on “all that means” doesn’t exactly strike me as a natural motion exactly. And I would recommend breaking the symmetry of the poses some more - a lot of the time it seems both hands are doing the same thing at the same time. It works for these gestures okay, but I think it would be a little improvement to break that up a little. But I really like everything else.
Jack Hebert
The character doesn't fit with the voice.
Jason
I really like the subtle movements, it really fits in well with the audio. My only suggestion is to add a little more movement to the shoulders, sometimes they feel a little stiff as if they lock off. But other than that it looks fantastic!!